Economy is one hallmark of good writing, so writers must learn how to cut the clutter. In order to eliminate wordy phrases and expressions from your writing, first you should add the terms redundancy, circumlocution, and tautology to your vocabulary.
A redundant expression says the same thing twice, as in raise up (rise up), swallow down, and follow behind. Other common redundancies:(actual) facts
few (in number)
green (in color)
grow (in size)
reason is (because)
round (in shape)
shiny (in appearance)
surrounded (on all sides)
warn (in advance)
A circumlocution includes a string of words that go all around the block to express one simple idea. Examples: in the event that instead of if; at the present time instead of now; and on a regular basis instead of regularly or hourly, daily, weekly, yearly, etc.. I have seen this last circumlocution so often in all kinds of writing that I have become allergic to it. Such expressions are not ungrammatical or repetitious, but they should be avoided because they’re wordy. More examples: a large proportion of (many); am in possession of (have); caused injuries to (injured); destroyed by fire (burned); draw the attention of/to (show, point out); during the time that (while); give rise to (cause); had occasion to be (was); in this day and age (today).
A tautology is “repetition of the same words or use of synonymous words in close succession.” Examples:
A major nuclear disaster could have been sparked by
who died of a fatal dose of heroin
pair of twins
Another example is Yogi Berra’s famous “It was déjà vu all over again.”
Other tautologies are of this type: each and every, one and the same, any and all, when and if, and separate and distinct.
It’s easy to use superfluous words inadvertently and tough to detect them in your own prose. That’s why a good copy editor can be of great help to writers.